tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6503611035725157101.post2263639012188196935..comments2023-06-01T03:48:11.031-11:00Comments on Meandering Maya: Imperfect BrillianceMaya Woodallhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09971543672776041394noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6503611035725157101.post-77257500730625554832012-05-08T17:01:00.521-11:002012-05-08T17:01:00.521-11:00Nice surprise here, and good words that show the b...Nice surprise here, and good words that show the brilliance. I liked that final line in one of the stanzas, "I am not done." Beautiful!Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6503611035725157101.post-79528324115650736432012-05-08T16:33:53.236-11:002012-05-08T16:33:53.236-11:00I think I will hold your title forever in my heart...I think I will hold your title forever in my heart. Imperfect Brilliance! Perfect!Jamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05258754539023377047noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6503611035725157101.post-71439263188168753362012-05-08T07:31:52.334-11:002012-05-08T07:31:52.334-11:00I love the way you didn't reveal the subject u...I love the way you didn't reveal the subject until the middle. I kept reading and wanting to know more. Nice!Robinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01132042235993262800noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6503611035725157101.post-63274973205112287552012-05-08T05:09:00.026-11:002012-05-08T05:09:00.026-11:00This is so beautiful--full of great images. But my...This is so beautiful--full of great images. But my favorite line is "Here I lie in my imperfect brilliance." I just love the way the words work together...Deb Dayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00861392500601183208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6503611035725157101.post-65551824734338234072012-05-08T02:36:57.439-11:002012-05-08T02:36:57.439-11:00I love it when the sun is generous and reveals shi...I love it when the sun is generous and reveals shimmering brilliance. I could feel my toes in the rushing water as I inspected this stone and then in turn reflected on our similarities. Nice.Betsy Hubbardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10492340502962987362noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6503611035725157101.post-73554046299908983582012-05-07T23:33:08.772-11:002012-05-07T23:33:08.772-11:00I like the surprise of this poem, the gentle revea...I like the surprise of this poem, the gentle revealing of the subject, a river stone. You carry the analogy completely to the end. Nice!Margaret Simonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04434866104385187658noreply@blogger.com